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Weird Word List: Bowing to Reality

OK.  It seems to me, from perusing the previous discussions, that we have lots of volunteers for Harvesting, but not so many folks want to Wrangle.  No blame to any of us — you see me saying I got no time to Wrangle Weird Words, right? — it’s a massive job.

Which means that we will need to go, with Great Trepidation on the part of the Luddite Writer, to a software sort.  We had several volunteers for this — if whomever is still interested in playing would shout out again, in response to this message, we can all put our heads together to see how best to split up the books.

I will still need at least one, and preferably three Wranglers, because, let’s face it, that’s a BIG pile o’novels over there, and some — I’m looking at you, Crystal books — are harder going than others.

The Wish List now looks like this:

1.  Automagicians

2.  Wranglers

3.  Cabana boy

The goal, one more time:  A list of Weird Words (including all “foreign” words, be they Liaden, Terran, Delgadan, Vandese, or etc.), and  Names (including ship names, planet names, city names, personal names) for each book.  One book = One list. In the order the words appear.

Someone had asked if I also wanted odd combos, such as “brother-cousin” or “close-kin” or “Silain-luthia”.  Of the examples given, the only pairing I would want would be “Silain-luthia” because Silain has the possibility of becoming I-dare-not-guess and luthia — is an invented word.

Why do I want this?  You guys have been so good about putting up with my fidgeting and fussing over this, you deserve the straight dope.

I want these lists, and in this particular format, for two reasons.

Reason One:  The Liaden Pronunciation Guide Steve and I have been talking about Forever.

Reason Two:   A bunch of Liaden books are going to be produced as audiobooks, RSN.  We have promised — actually, given what happened with poor Mr. Shanks — we have insisted that we will provide pronunciation assistance.  It is Reason Two that produces the deadline.

Worries:  I am particularly concerned that names stay together — Val Con yos’Phelium, Shan yos’Galan and etc.  This is the major need for the Word Wranglers.  I’m not so worried about bizarre English words sneaking into the list, because, if they’re that bizarre, they belong on the list.

. . .I think that’s it.

OK — who’s in?

 

But it would have been better if…OR You didn’t write the story I wanted to read

There are spoilers below for the movie “Hugo” and also, perhaps, for the novel entitled The Invention of Hugo Cabret. You have been Warned.

* * *

Last night, I watched a movie called “Hugo,” about a boy who has been the recipient of several devastating tragedies in his short life, including the loss of both parents, the unwelcome arrival of a drunken uncle into what is left of his life, and that uncle’s almost immediate, and somewhat problematic, departure.

Hugo and his father were, just before his father’s death, rebuilding an automaton that the museum his father worked at had received but had never put on display.  After his father’s death, repairing the automaton becomes a sort of a quest for Hugo.  He half-believes that the automaton — which writes, like The Writer  built by Pierre Jaquet-Droz, in 1768 — will, when repaired, transcribe a message for Hugo from his father.  Hugo also states explicitly, that, after the automaton is repaired, he’ll be “less alone.”

Hugo lives in the clocks of the Paris train station.  His drunken uncle had a job keeping the clocks running; he trained Hugo to do the work so he could spend more time drinking — this is fortunate, for the uncle soon drops out of Hugo’s life, leaving him utterly alone.

Hugo’s life in the train station is perilous.  Presumably, the uncle was paid for his labor, but his nephew is not; he is afraid that he’ll be caught by the Station Inspector and sent to the orphanage, so he stays out of sight as much as possible.  He steals food, and he steals mechanical toys from the old man who runs the toy shop in the train station.

Until one day, the old man nabs him, makes him empty his pockets and takes the notebook that the plans for the automaton are drawn in.

The lives of the lonely boy and the old man have now touched and they rapidly become entwined.  The old man is revealed, through the efforts of Hugo and the old man’s god-daughter Isabelle, who befriends Hugo, layer-by-layer, as old men ought to be revealed, because lives are like onions, as someone who is not me once wisely said.

The movie is remarkably clear in stating the desires of the characters:  Hugo wants to belong, Isabelle wants to belong, the fearsome Station Inspector wants to belong, though he denies it (You’ll learn a lot in the orphanage, he tells Hugo; I did.  You’ll learn discipline and how to keep yourself.  You’ll learn that you don’t need a family.  And he repeats that, fiercely, as if to convince himself, as well as the boy — “You don’t need a family!”).  The old man…wants to forget the past.

He’s not alone in this — the Great War has recently ended.  The Station Inspector, again, when trying to woo the pretty flower girl, sees her looking at his mechanical leg and he says to her, flatly, “Yes, I was wounded in the war, and it will never heal.”

Wars are like that.

Life is like that.

I won’t go on any further, except to say that the entwining of the lives of the old man, the boy, the girl produce an outcome in which all of them belong; the old man, far from forgetting the past, is brought to remember it, to see it through the eyes of others — and recovers his soul.

* * *

It’s hard for me to see this as anything but one cohesive story — the boy’s happy ending depends upon the old man remembering who he is; the old man will not remember until the boy forces him to do so.  These two outcomes are inextricable; they cannot be separated without damage being done to both.

And yet — yes, I’m finally coming to the point, thank you — And yet. . .

There were professional reviews of “Hugo” which complained that the filmmaker had really wanted to make a movie about Georges Melies (the name of the old man in “Hugo”), a pioneer of filmmaking in the 1900s, and should therefore have done so, and left the little boy out of the thing.

There were other professional reviews which complained that the story of the old man could easily have been dispensed with, in favor of the story of the boy who lived in the clock.

They said, some of these reviewers that these other stories — the stories that they would have preferred to see, would have been better than the story the filmmaker actually made.  (Regular people said the same thing; a young lady said so in my LJ this morning, which is sort of why you have this rant.)

But here, they — the professional reviewers and private viewers — are wrong.

What they would have had, absent the old man, or the boy, would not have been, necessarily, a better film, but a different film.  This is a small, but important difference.

It’s perfectly fine to say, of a book, a movie, a poem — this wasn’t the story I expected, or I wanted a different story, or even I didn’t like this story.

The error lies in stating, unilaterally, that, by mutilating the work as it stands, it will become “better” — which is to say, more in line with the taste of the viewer or reader.  That is an error, and it does no justice to the actual work that has been done.

. . .and having said this, I feel much better, thank you.

 

 

 

 

The Eternal To-Do List

1. Send “short” bios to anthology editor, as soon as clarity is achieved on what “short” means in this case.
2. Turn in novel proposals (3) to Madame the Editor — April 23
3. Close SRM books for FY 2011 and Forever (due at accountant April 25)
4. Clean office, includes moving 2011 files to basement and opening 2012 files
5. ConQuesT — May 25-27
6. Word lists first two books — June 10 (approx)
7. Interview at WERU Writers Forum with Joan Clemens & Ellie O’Leary, June 14, 10 a.m.
8. Turn in short story to Baen — July 1
9. Turn in Trade Secret — July 15
10. Compile short stories into collections, and write forwards for each volume — due May 15, and August 15, 2013, but sooner is prolly better, just to get them off the desk.
11. Prep and write Carousel Tides sequels due early and mid 2013
12. Figure out the Liaden audible lexicon
13. Feasibility study: remodel bathroom
14. Pie in the Sky: Vacation — Septemberish

No sooner on the list, than off again: Read galleys for “Skyblaze” to appear in Fantastic Stories of the Imagination; email correx to editor

Things to be done in-between the things to be done:
1. Autograph 1,000 pages
2. Proofread galleys: Ghost Ship and Dragon Ship
3. Write new stories for Splinter Universe

And we’ll have fun, fun, fun, ’til her daddy takes the Tbird away…

When last we saw our plucky heroine, she had sworn a return to the discussion of compiling a Weird Word List, RSN.

Since swearing that awful vow, she has, with her husband-coauthor gone to the Rockland Public Library, where they talked about subjects Divers and Various to a small, but appreciative audience.

She then returned home and commenced in with her bit of Dragon Ship revisions.  This entailed a good deal of picking out of stitches, setting new stitches, bringing Stuff up, deleting other stuff, rewriting a couple scenes from a different POV  — in general, all possible, needful work, but fiddly and time-consuming.

The revisions were emailed back to Madame the Editor early this afternoon, just in time for the galleys for a short story which is part of an upcoming anthology to arrive, the editor citing a short turnaround.  Steve’s reading those now; I’ll make my pass tomorrow morning, over — all together now! — coffee!  Sadly, but in all likelihood, my third or fourth cup of coffee.

Steve and I are determined to watch a movie tonight; we have Hugo in from Netflix.  Tomorrow, after my pass over the story, I must and shall begin the end of year/end of game bookkeeping for SRM Publisher.

I will also, honest, contrive to get back to the word list, ’cause that deadline’s not getting any longer.  Funny how they never do.

Also on the table for blog discussion is a request to describe how I learned to write in a particular voice, and! another post about Voice, and how Science Fiction isn’t only Stories of the Far Future, and why extrapolating from our own world into the future is a mug’s game, anyway.

So!  Lots to look forward to, but right now?

I am going to watch that movie.

 

Books read 2012

Sylvester / OR, The Wicked Uncle, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Death and Resurrection, R. A. MacAvoy
The Unknown Ajax, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Black Sheep, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Stealing the Elf-King’s Roses, Diane Duane (e)
The Reluctant Widow, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Friday’s Child, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Dragon Ship manuscript, Sharon Lee and Steve Miller (e)
Kim, Rudyard Kipling (e)
Regency Buck, Georgette Heyer (read aloud w/Steve)
Pollyanna, Eleanor H. Porter (e)
Chimera, Rob Thurman (e)

Come what may, gonna dance the day away

Apologies…today became disorderly, and I did not get back to the discussion of harvesting Weird Words.  I thought I might make it back this evening, but some paperwork has landed, and it needs to be dealt with, um, now; and I still need to sort out our readings and anchor lines for the talk at Rockland Library tomorrow evening, so!  Discussion resumes Friday.

I am bummed — rather ridiculously so — to find that I have missed seeing “John Carter” on the big screen. *saves it on Netflix*

Socks continues to accommodate the household.  He has a quiet and unassuming disposition, and what’s looking like a whim of steel.  Mozart objects to his presence, periodically, by growling, and occasionally bopping him on the head.  This morning, in fact, Mozart was on the co-pilot’s chair, and Socks entered the room, strolling up to the chair to see what was doin’.  Mo growled and bopped.  Socks retreated exactly two cat steps, sat down on the rug facing Mozart, closed his eyes, and continued to sit there — just drowsing, you know, and Completely Unconcerned™ —  until it was time for us all to troop down the hall in search of caffeine and multigrain bagels.

Overall, the occasions of bopping and hissing are very low.  I’m thinking that the half-house refurb  in November gave Scrabble and Mozart a new benchmark:  “How bad is it?”  “Well, they haven’t torn up the floor yet.”

I have, for those who may be interested. uploaded eBook editions of  my mysteries, Barnburner and Gunshy to the Kindle Store and the Nook Store (the Smashwords editions are going to be a loooong time coming, I fear).  As of this writing, both books are available in the Kindle Store; they’re still “processing” at BN.

And now?  Paperwork calls.

 

To-Do List

1.  Prepare for talk at Rockland Library
2.  Talk at Rockland, Maine Public Library — April 5 (6:30 p.m.)
3.  Clean office, includes moving 2011 files to basement and opening 2012 files
4.  Dragon Ship revisions due at Baen — April 15
5.  Turn in novel proposals (3) to Madame the Editor — April 23
6.  Close SRM books for FY 2011 and Forever (due at accountant April 25)
7.  ConQuesT — May 25-27
8.  Word lists first two books — June 10 (approx)
9.  Interview at WERU Writers Forum with Joan Clemens & Ellie O’Leary, June 14, 10 a.m.
10.  Turn in short story to Baen — July 1
11.  Turn in Trade Secret — July 15
12.  Figure out the Liaden audible lexicon
13.  Feasibility study:  remodel bathroom
14. Pie in the Sky: Vacation — Septemberish

Note:  The above list does not include incoming tasks that will have to be adjusted for when they manifest, such as signing tip-in sheets or reading galleys.  Also not included, compiling stories for submission for short story collections; prep time, plotting, and writing of “Carousel” books under contract. Or going to see “John Carter.”  Have I mentioned that I really, really want to see “John Carter?”

The Weird Word Project

I’ve been thinking about the various suggestions on how to manage this project, and I want to thank everyone who participated in the discussion.  My thoughts follow.

1.  What I really, truly need a is a list of Weird Words (including all “foreign” words, be they Liaden, Terran, Delgadan, Vandese, or etc.), and  Names (including ship names, planet names, city names) for each book.  One book = One list.  It does, after thought, seem best that the WW and Names be combined into one, very long list.

2.  Ideally, the words should be in the order they appear in the book in question — which was the idea behind the page numbers.

3. We do have to work within the constraints of my abilities.  I am not a database whiz — not even close. I can keep the dern things, but multi-level/multi-directional sorts are beyond my skill level.  Telling me that database wrangling is simple has in the past produced. . .no discernible improvement in my ability to do advanced sorts of any kind.  In fact, my ability to deal actually plummets.

3A.  The commodity I’m very short on for the foreseeable future is time.  I cannot myself accept bits of databases to chain onto a master database or anything of that sort.  Even if it *is* dead easy (which, believe me, it’s not), it will still take time.  This project has a deadline associated with it; I’m not entirely sure when, but I don’t think it impossible that the lists for at least the first two books would be needed by early June.

4.  It seems to me that, if the word harvesting process is completely automated, someone is going to have to check the lists against the books anyway, to make sure the automagic didn’t miss something. (Why, yes, I have had programs fail me. Why do you ask?)  That said, it seems like it would be very useful to run a script as a check, in case the humans missed something.

5.  In terms of volunteers, I think we’re going to need:

*At least one Word Wrangler for each book, to receive the information from volunteers, or to tend the database/wiki, check the list against a software-produced list (if any), and to compile the final list that will be forwarded to me

*At least two Word Harvesters for each book, who will compile the words and the page numbers and either forward them to the Wrangler, or enter them in a database/wiki/form

*An Automagician to automagically generate a list from each book to be checked against the list produced by the Word Harvesters.  This is a luxury.

Note:  I don’t really care about the process used to produce the lists.  All I really care about is having accurate lists.  That means that if three or four folks want to pool resources as the Gathering Team on Book A, I don’t care how they bag the words, only that all the words are bagged, and that I receive them in a simple, and understandable, format.

Does all of the above make sense (or is, at least, clear; I don’t actually expect anybody to enter into the Database-Free Zone that is my brain)?

Discussion open until tomorrow, Wednesday, mid-morning.

Thanks!

 

Potpourri and Publishing News

Ahem.

Well, since Locus has sort of broken the news, though they got the author wrong and published it in…a rather peculiar place, I guess that It Can Now Be Told.

Sharon Lee has, through agent Jennifer Jackson, sold
two sequels to Carousel Tides to Toni Weisskopf at Baen.
The manuscripts are due in 2013

Let’s see, what else? Um…

Sharon Lee and Steve Miller, have, through agent Jennifer Jackson, sold two short story collections to Toni Weisskopf at Baen.  The collections, as yet untitled, will include all of the Adventures in the Liaden Universe® stories through Skyblaze (Number 17).  No publication dates as yet.

And!

Ghost Ship is Number One in the
SFSite’s Readers’ Choice Best Book of 2011!

Ahem.  If you missed Ghost Ship, Don Blyly at Uncle Hugo’s SF Bookstore in Minneapolis, still has 50 autographed hard cover editions in hand (as of this writing, the hardcover run has otherwise sold out).  Here’s a link to the Lee and Miller catalog page.

ALSO, if you want a signed copy of Dragon Ship, the sequel to Ghost Ship, coming out in September, you can pre-order from the same page.

Oh!  There’s a nice reader review of Agent of Change here — useful for those of you who have been trying to get friends hooked to try the Liaden Universe®.

If you’re close to Maine, Lee and Miller will be speaking at the Rockland Public Library on April 5 (that’s Thursday!) from 6:30 p.m.  Our topic will be Where Authors Get Their Ideas, with illustrative readings from their published work.

If you’re thirsty, remember Fanboy Glass for Tree-and-Dragon wine glasses, beer mugs, and stout glasses.  Note:  Fanboy Glass ships to the US and Canada only.

…I think that’s all the news that’s fit to print.  Onward!  to, err, more coffee.